My story ending

After a while I start to search something that could show me any evidence or some detail about why Budd and Shirley disappeared.

I walk through the corridor and step into a bedroom that seems suspicious and there , I find some photos of a little boy, I didn’t know that they had a son. Suddenly, something very strange appears behind me and touches my head, that thing makes me feel a little bit scared, but I want it to know what happens with that family so I continue my investigation.
Then I hear a piercing shout from the other bedroom, I run away to that bedroom to see what was happening there and I find something really weird, on the floor there are some clothes apparently of Shirley and in the clothes I find a little trace of blood, I realize that something grim happened there. Then I step into the master bedroom and start to look something that could tell me what happened that day on that house and suddenly something tells me that I have to look in the closet. So I walk straight to the closet when something scares me a lot, “those are bones!!” I scream. I can not believe what I'm seeing there and start to run out of the house, but someone stops me, I can not see who he is, and starts to tell me that I have to die for all the things that I saw on that bedroom. I start to struggle with that person and after that I saw his face, “I can not believe this”, I said and then I died.

I can not believe who did that thing to our neighbors, I can not believe that my husband killed them and then killed me.

2 comentarios:

  1. Oh my god!
    It is a really good ending Cony!
    creative and unexpected.
    I like it!.

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  2. nice vocabulary! It's a nice a ending, I agree with gabriela.
    That is an awesome ending! very unexpected

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